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Pfffft Revision #2

By emily4154

Bizarre & Miscellaneous

Revised: 20-Aug-2011
Added: 19-Aug-2011
Singapore

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Diarrhoea

In school, i was assigned to do a descriptive writing and one of the topics was 'explosive Diarrhoea' which I felt was the only thing I could describe well. Hope it's not too disgusting. Please comment.

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“Oh no.” I could feel the gurgle travelling towards my anus. I stood up and tried to make my way to the toilet on the wet floor, as fast as I could. “Pffft!” The diarrhea squirted like my butt like an explosion. The stench, the feeling, was overwhelming.

“Oh no.” Another gurgle. This time, it was louder, much louder. The diarrhea started oozing out like cream being squeezed out from a piping bag. “Oh no. Oooh nooo.” I could feel the diarrhea spreading to my butt, staining my uniform. I could feel those stares from my schoolmates burning the back of my neck. What was I? An exhibition?

Finally, I was in a cubicle in the toilet, away from those burning stares, somewhere where nobody would be able to see the stain on my uniform, where nobody would stare at me, myself and I.

I pulled down my panties and “ Splat!” My diarrhea splattered onto the floor. “ oh crap, oh crap, oh crap.” What was I going to do? Now my panties, my uniform, shoes and socks were soiled.

I winced, and clutched my stomach as a throbbing pain shot through my abdomen and a third gurgle started towards my abdomen. In my desperation to sit on the toilet bowl, I slipped and fell on my diarrhea. Urgh! Now, my panties, my uniform, my socks, my shoes and my legs were dirty. Could this day get any worse?

But, my nightmare was not over…

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