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stand by you're side Revision #2

By nour el dessouky

Poems

Revised: 13-May-2011
Added: 13-May-2011
Egypt

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stand by you're side

i hope u like it

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My heart is beating fast
I miss our past
But now all I have is pain
I wish I could restrain
From thinking about you
I wish I could undo
All that ever happened
Now my heart is blackened
From everything I faced without you
I wish I could renew
You’re feelings and runaway
Just to be with you but now you’re far away
You know you care
You’re just unaware
Of how much I’d sacrifice
Just so u could recognize
How perfect we could be
You have my guarantee
That I’d standby you’re side
Whenever you cried

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Emadev

May 14, 2011 at 1:12 AM PDT

Well written. I like that you have rhyming words at the end of each line. Good attempt.