Writing
The Promise Revision #2
By Taunt00
Poems
Revised: 20-May-2011
Added: 05-May-2011
United States
Average rating: 10
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The Promise
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Chapter
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Your lose skin
This gentle squeeze
Loving you is blessed sin
Your gentle breeze
The sunset marks the time
Your ever late glow
Your brilliance and shine
The tides come low
Your sunshine smile
Your star gazing eyes
These teasing trails
Your warm sighs
In the brushing waves
You are my eternity
In a moment as today
My heartbeats eternally
What years and days come and go
Minutes, seconds, night or day
Even stars who someday lose all glow
This love grows as will never let go.
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Chlor O'Phyll
May 9, 2011 at 7:56 PM PDT
Man, you are a poem making machine! Another very nice poem.
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Alexis6
May 9, 2011 at 5:19 PM PDT
Very Sweet.