Writing
far away Revision #4
By nour el dessouky
Poems
Revised: 09-May-2011
Added: 05-May-2011
Egypt
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far away
sorta of a poem
but it doesn't rhyme
i'll try to right it again but make it rhyme hopefully
hope u like it
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1
(girl)
where were u
when all i need was for u to tell me that u loved me
for u to show me how much u cared
to help me get up again when everything was falling apart
each dau u spend being far away
u break my heart even more and more(boy )
u know i always loved u
u can feel it
nd so can i
i've been far away for too long
but i've always been dreaming of being with u
all i want to hear is i forgive u
cause i'll stop breathing if i lose u
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