Writing
The Terrapin In A Tank Revision #1
By emily4154
Poems
Revised: 14-Mar-2011
Added: 14-Mar-2011
Singapore
Average rating: 10
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Terrapin
The fourth poem I've written for my English assignment. It's my favourite. When I said in the poem that "No one worries about me," I still mean that the terrapin is being cared for.
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I do not worry about food
I do not worry about water
Nobody worries about me
I worry about no one
I eat at my own will
I swim at my own will
But
No matter how fast I swim
No matter how hard I swim
I am still at the same spot
With a shiny shell,
I am Sparkled, The terrapin in a tank
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April 1, 2011 at 7:32 PM PDT
I'm sure you take good care of your terrapin (re. your comment). You describe the little turtle's life well in a few words. Like it.
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Chlor O'Phyll
March 29, 2011 at 10:25 AM PDT
A bit sad but real. Hope you got an A.