Writing

I Am Revision #1

By emily4154

Poems

Revised: 14-Mar-2011
Added: 14-Mar-2011
Singapore

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Dog

It's a free verse I've written for my school assignment. Almost all the sentences start with I Am because I want to emphasise on the title.

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I am cute
I am furry
I am something with a waggy tail
I am something with a sensitive nose
I am man’s best friend

I am not a toy
I have feelings
I am not a piece of garbage
I am not meant to be beaten
I am not meant to be abandoned

For I, am a pet dog

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Lefellow

April 2, 2011 at 4:01 PM PDT

Try: I am with feelings. Maybe?