Writing
The End of Childhood Revision #1
By MayckoM
Poems
Revised: 09-Jan-2011
Added: 09-Jan-2011
Canada
Average rating: 7
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poem children time juxtaposition
A quick metaphoric poem.
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The End of Childhood.
Imagination is the child with no limits
Blue skies, white clouds
His room is the fortress safekeeping treasuries.
Grey stones, Pine trees
The swing set is the portal to her mystic realm.
Bright lights, star dust
Their bikes are the racecars in the boiling desert
Heat waves, parched land.
Time, their endless doom firm to root their foundation
Age wears, pain tears.
Maturity engulfs them.
--Maycko Macapugas
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VonPeeblez
January 20, 2011 at 1:01 AM PST
Awesome Maycko! I really like the shift in mood! Beautifull!