Writing
I Am Revision #1
By emily4154
Poems
Revised: 14-Mar-2011
Added: 14-Mar-2011
Singapore
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Dog
It's a free verse I've written for my school assignment. Almost all the sentences start with I Am because I want to emphasise on the title.
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I am cute
I am furry
I am something with a waggy tail
I am something with a sensitive nose
I am man’s best friend
I am not a toy
I have feelings
I am not a piece of garbage
I am not meant to be beaten
I am not meant to be abandoned
For I, am a pet dog
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Lefellow
April 2, 2011 at 3:01 PM PDT
Try: I am with feelings. Maybe?